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freakin lol'd

for like 5 minutes straight.

i seriously dig your style

but i think most of NG is simply too ignorant to enjoy music such as this. i myself have a handful of projects in the work that sound somewhat similar to this. man this is pure gold, i'm diggin every second of it. apart from minor composition issues, i have no complaints. great mastering, great vibe. what software/hardware do you use? i really would like to collab, and i don't say that to many NG artists. keep doin what you're doin!

Smokazzi responds:

The nooby Fl Studio actually.
And yeah, a collab would be a great experience for me.

i dig it

sounds like Let there be Light by Justice. good skipping, even better then theirs i'd say. Justice somehow gets their stuff out with next to mastering. I really dig this, it gets great when you bring that multi-synth chorus. Excellent mastering. When you break up the song, though, a few times it became disruptive to the flow. You gotta break it up but still keep the flow, you know what i'm sayin? also, it's way too short! 5/5 10/10 my first one in months

pretty good presentation

but waaaaaaaay too much reverb. it muddles everything up. good transitions. not much to talk about in terms of melody, but for what you were attempting it came out pretty well. but damn, too much reverb lol. generally you don't want to put reverb on a kick. if you want to achieve some sort of atmosphere, get a wind sample or something and play it in the background, probably high-passed.

for your first time

this is pretty good lol. i've been at it a long ass time, feel free to hit me up for tips n tricks :}

did you just start FL?

if so, this is pretty respectable. i thought the hi-hats were really out of place though, i'd recommend something with alot less low range. as far as an experiment goes, it was pretty cool.

sounds great!

sounds like you accomplished what you wanted here. two things struck me as off, though. the first one is that the off-beat drums you use towards the end are simple way too off beat, and are too distracting from the epic, intense feel of the over all piece. you aught to figure out a way to quicken the pace like you are trying to do without causing so much distraction. and the other thing is you spelled it wrong :P it's spelled exhilaration.

JeffHeim responds:

Haha thanks, sometimes i just can't spell :D

As for the drums near the end, I'll go back and make some changes. Thanks for the review!

at first i was like >:[

and then i was like dang, wow, someone actually remixed the song pretty well. i liked it alot! it's very original and well executed across the board. my only problem with it is that the vocals are too loud, and they overwhelm everything else a bit. a simple volume reduction would probably make this song perfect.

vipertarun responds:

point noted........will upload a new version with reduced voice......thanx for the review and the advice

freaking insane

the composition blows my mind. talk about freaking epic. i only feel justified in giving you an 8/10 though because your mixing simply didn't match up to your composition. if i had to suggest anything, it would be to lower the volume on some of the hits and the guitar because it overloads sometimes and simply drowns out other things like the (excellent) percussion. all of that aside, this track bloody great, and i should probably just listen to it on speakers instead of my mastering headphones :P

not bad

i enjoyed the chimes and the melody you used it for. the bass was too overwhelming though, particularly with how it related to the kick drum. tone down the bass guitar, and up the bass on the kick drum and you'd be good there. also it's very repetitive, but you were just experimenting so it can be forgiven. as a suggestion, you should probably use a raspy synth, maybe something with an oldschool video game sound and create a melody over the chimes.

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